Hi Josabeth! Great annotations. I’m not too familiar with the story and your annotations made me look into the story more, and suddenly its a new childhood memory unlocked. I really enjoyed how you talked about the intedned audiences of the texts and why they changed/evolved. I couldn’t resist Gustafson’s dog illustrations of the story, super cute! Your own thoughts added into the annotations was a plus too! The academic article was intriguing and got me thinking too.
Hello Josabeth, you did a really good job explaining he differences between all the versions you chose. Good job!
Hi Josabeth,
I really liked your style of writing for the annotations! They were easy to read and follow along with. Reading this felt as though the readers were listening to you speak this aloud and it felt engaging. Specifically, “The Emperor’s New Clothes” by Scott Gustafson seemed like a really fun and interesting variation to the story. I think you did well with these annotations.
Hi Josabeth,
I thought you did a really excellent job with your bibliography. Your descriptions were well written, and had been very informative. I also appreciated the background that you added to your sources. Your language also made the bibliography interesting, and it made me be interested in hearing about the texts you included.
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4 thoughts on “Annotated Bibliography”
Hi Josabeth! Great annotations. I’m not too familiar with the story and your annotations made me look into the story more, and suddenly its a new childhood memory unlocked. I really enjoyed how you talked about the intedned audiences of the texts and why they changed/evolved. I couldn’t resist Gustafson’s dog illustrations of the story, super cute! Your own thoughts added into the annotations was a plus too! The academic article was intriguing and got me thinking too.
Hello Josabeth, you did a really good job explaining he differences between all the versions you chose. Good job!
Hi Josabeth,
I really liked your style of writing for the annotations! They were easy to read and follow along with. Reading this felt as though the readers were listening to you speak this aloud and it felt engaging. Specifically, “The Emperor’s New Clothes” by Scott Gustafson seemed like a really fun and interesting variation to the story. I think you did well with these annotations.
Hi Josabeth,
I thought you did a really excellent job with your bibliography. Your descriptions were well written, and had been very informative. I also appreciated the background that you added to your sources. Your language also made the bibliography interesting, and it made me be interested in hearing about the texts you included.
Comments are closed.